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SuperEpic, page 5.
Sorry for the delay. School had begun, I took a weekend trip to Edmonton, and all kinds of things like that. Truthfully though, I could have found time; I'm just a bit too lazy sometimes.
I don't mind page 5, except looking at it now I shouldn't just leave the last frame completely backgroundless. I may have to adjust that in coming days.
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Edits have been done and added. Now it looks like the ghost has something to do with the lamp. And backgrounds have been adjusted.
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SuperEpic story and characters (c) Matt Zerr
Sorry for the delay. School had begun, I took a weekend trip to Edmonton, and all kinds of things like that. Truthfully though, I could have found time; I'm just a bit too lazy sometimes.
I don't mind page 5, except looking at it now I shouldn't just leave the last frame completely backgroundless. I may have to adjust that in coming days.
-Edit-
Edits have been done and added. Now it looks like the ghost has something to do with the lamp. And backgrounds have been adjusted.
Page 4: Click
SuperEpic story and characters (c) Matt Zerr
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"Like a spidey sense?!" This is gonna sound harsh, but the writing in this is really awkward and anachronistic. It reminds me of every other "fantasy" web comic where the characters coincidentally talk like 21st century American college students. It feels like you're really not interested in creating another world here.
You could probably get away with it if your linework didn't need tightening up too -- but SOMETHING has to carry this comic, either art or writing. Some detail in the backgrounds would really help. And the lettering does NOT work -- please please learn to letter by hand.
You could probably get away with it if your linework didn't need tightening up too -- but SOMETHING has to carry this comic, either art or writing. Some detail in the backgrounds would really help. And the lettering does NOT work -- please please learn to letter by hand.